The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The six pie charts compare the domestic, agricultural, and industrial water consumption in six major parts of the world.
Overall, the majority of water is used for industrial purposes in North America and Europe, while water is mostly used to support agriculture in other regions/areas. Additionally, the amount of water consumed for domestic demand accounts for the lowest percentages, except South America, Central Asia and Africa.
In both North America and Europe, the principal water use appears in the industrial sector, which accounted for nearly half of the total. However, water usage for this need is the smallest proportion in the other four locations, with 12% in South East Asia, 7% in South America, 7% in Africa, and 5% in Central Asia, respectively.
By contrast, households in North America and Europe have utilized water resources at the least number, with only 14% and 15%, respectively, which is still much more than the figures for the other four countries. In correspondence, in Southeast Asia and Central Asia, less than 10% of water is used for home demands.
The developing areas invest far more water in agriculture, each having around 80%, and even the least, the figure for South America still constitutes 71% while in Southeast Asia and Central Asia utilize considerably more water in agriculture, ranging from 81% to 88%. However, in Africa and Central Asia even use less water in industry (merely 5%~7%, with the highest percentage 12%)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22268907563 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78942551627 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521008403361 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3986576345 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.111111111 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268277600988 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130771481253 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588803058609 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168759437893 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515330339978 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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