The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts compare the amount of water used in different sectors in 6 areas: North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
Overall, in North America and Europe, water use for industy accounts for the largest portion. However, argriculture consumes the majority of water in the remaining areas.
In North America and Europe, water for industrial use takes up around 48% and 53% respectively. However, the amount of water consumed in this sector in South American is only 10%. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at the consumption of water in agriculture. While the figure for South American is relatively high, at 71%, this sector in two other areas consume at lower level, at around 39% and 32%. In terms of domestic water usage, the figures are recorded at 13%, 19% and 15% in North American, South America and Europe respectively.
Turning to the remaining areas, the figures of water use in agriculture are very high, at 81%, 84% and 88% in South East Asia, Africa and Central Asia. Of three areas, South East Asia spends the highest level of water consumption in industrial sector, while Africa’s domestic water consumption is highest at 9%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95544554455 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53608889583 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509900990099 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6467456265 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171469254615 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083431014979 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478322474994 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12646555975 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366081841272 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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