The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
domethe given charts illustrate the water usage in six major part of the world for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
overal, it is readily apparent that water consumption for agriculture occupies the largest propotion in south africa, central africa, south east asia and africa, while north Amercan and europe use most water for industrial purpose
looking at the charts in detail, we can see that 71% of the consumption of water in south africa belongs to agriculture. the figure for water used for agriculture in central africa, south east asia and africa are 88%, 81% and 84%, respectively. in contrast, industrial purpose accounts for the least propotion of water usage in south africa, at 10%, compares to 7% in africa and 5% in central africa. at the same time, south east asia people spend 7% of the total amount of water used on domestic, which records the lowest figure
in north Afrca, 48% of water is spent on industrial purpose. meanwhile, the propotion of water consumption for industry is 53%. the water spent on agriculture in north africa is 39%, which is 7% higher than those in europe. in addition, domestic use makes up the smallest percentage in both areas, at 13% and 15%stic use makes up the smallest percentage in both areas, at 13% and 15%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91705069124 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6246656953 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470046082949 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4766070722 43.030603864 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.375 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253984946932 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126594311444 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527444126125 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176709248745 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319644193124 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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