Countries should produce food for their own citizens and limit food imports as much as possible. what intend do you agree or disagree
A school of thought holds that national food production should be encouraged and dependence on imported food should be reduced. Although i concur that this thinking is beneficial to some extent, i would argue that it is not viable for some nations to achieve complete self-sufficiency due to their geographical and climate constraints
On the one hand, the opinion to creating food for themselves is attractive for several reasons. With national food production, citizens do not have to deal with the lack of food resources or food that can not be transported from other countries, which ensures the food security of the nation. Another major benefit is that they can access food at a more reasonable price as it does not include transportation fees, taxation and other charges that may affect the cost of food. In general, self-produced food is not contained preservatives or toxic chemicals to help with long-distance delivery, making it a healthier choice for consumers than those imported food
Despite the aforementioned benefits, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that reducing the reliance on imported food is not always feasible. This is evidenced by Ireland, a polar country with extremely harsh weather. The temperature of the area is under 0 celsius all year round, making it impossible to grow any kind of plant there. Therefore, importing food from overseas is a need to provide a sufficient amount of food for their citizens. Another large consumer of imported food is Egypt. Most of its geography is desert, which is hard to raise animals or cultivate vegetables to satisfy the national demand of food. In such cases, importing food becomes a necessity to supplement domestic production and ensure food security for the population
In conclusion, while becoming food-independent has several benefits, I am of concrete opinion that it is not always possible to reduce reliance on food imports
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may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16987179487 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00590962701 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7987118627 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.636363636 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364292091251 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144814747262 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822464292805 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22469975116 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474103487411 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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