The six pie charts illustrate the percentage of water used in each of the three categories (Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic) in North and South America, Europe, Africa, Central and South Asia.
Overall, in four out of six areas, most of the water is used for agricultural purposes while in the other two areas (North America and Europe) water is mainly used for Industrial works. Moreover, in three out of six areas, domestic purposes use the least amount of water, while in the other three regions, industries use the minimum amount of water.
To begin, in four of the mentioned six regions, agriculture accounts for most of the water used. In Central Asia, 88% of its total water used goes towards agriculture, comparatively Africa and Southeast Asia uses a slightly less water for agriculture at 84% and 81%. South America spends 71% of its total water usage behind agriculture, whereas in North America agricultural functions consume water nearly half as much as South America (39%). Finally, agricultural tasks in Europe takes up the least amount of water at only 32% among all the regions.
Furthermore, in North America and Europe, a huge chunk (48% and 53% respectively) of their water goes behind industrial purposes. Whereas, only about one-tenth or less of total water usage goes towards Industrial purposes in Africa (7%), South America (10%), Central Asia (5%) and South East Asia (12%). Lastly, domestic tasks use less than 20% of total water usage in each of the six regions. In north America 13%, South America 19%, Europe 15%, Africa 9%, Central and South East Asia 7% of the total water used goes for domestic causes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'slightly less water'.
Suggestion: slightly less water
...ratively Africa and Southeast Asia uses a slightly less water for agriculture at 84% and 81%. South ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94525547445 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53111333438 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441605839416 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9138254365 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184895170903 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953203221912 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624336117853 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141174874789 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545370433311 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'slightly less water'.
Suggestion: slightly less water
...ratively Africa and Southeast Asia uses a slightly less water for agriculture at 84% and 81%. South ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94525547445 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53111333438 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441605839416 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9138254365 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184895170903 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953203221912 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624336117853 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141174874789 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545370433311 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.