the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the pie charts illustrate the water treatment for various purposes in North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and Southeast Asia measure in the percentage number.

Overall, the percentage of agricultural used is the most common use in four countries, except for North America and Europe.

Further, North America and Europe have different common water used compares with other countries. They have 48 percent and 53 percent respectively for an industrial use while the other countries only have under 13 percent in this area.

Africa, Central Asia and Southeast Asia have a big percentage in agricultural use. In this sector, the percentages of used are above 80 percent which breaks down in 84 percent used in Africa, 88 percent in Central Asia and 81 percent in Southeast Asia. Furthermore, Central Asia has the biggest number of the agricultural use in all the countries.

And also in South America, the second common water used is in domestic use. This also has the highest number in all the countries. It measures in 19 percent follows by 15 percent in Europe, 13 percent in North America, 9 percent in Africa and 7 percent for both Central Asia and Southeast Asia.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, so, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06565656566 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65238081107 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459595959596 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5168640434 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127091175604 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697118858039 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414834900747 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947272681864 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265887811997 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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