The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts given demonstrate water consumption in six regions all over the world for three purposes, namely agriculture, industry and residence.

As can be inferred from the graph, it is immediately obvious that water is consumed predominantly for farming activities in South America, Africa, Central Asia and Southeast Asia. Meanwhile, generous allocation of water in North America and Europe is recorded for industrial purpose.

In Africa, agriculture accounts for the bulk of water consumed at 84%. Whereas, there is no significant discrepancies seen in the two other categories with the figure of 7 and 9% respectively for industrial and household use of water. A similar pattern takes place in South America, Central Asia and Southeast Asia, where farming purpose makes up a large proportion of 71, 88 and 81% respectively. The figure for industry ranges from 5-12% for these regions.

Contrary to the above regions, North America and Europe see an opposite water consumption with roughly one third of the amount used for farming, at 39 and 32% respectively. Comparatively, the distribution of water for agriculture purpose in these two areas is rather uniform. In particular, only a meager proportion of water (13%) is allocated to
residential use in NA, while this amount in Europe stays at 15%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... proportion of water 13% is allocated to residential use in NA, while this amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, whereas, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30622009569 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03959207518 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602870813397 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.787743257 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199449917218 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852399740128 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330973028362 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108860820504 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456942812131 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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