The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six ares of the world.
The given pie charts depict , the consumption of water ratio for various types of purposes in six areas of the world.
According to the chart , the highest water consumption is agricultural use and the lowest in domestic use. On the other hand , North America consumption of industrial use , just over a half while agricultural use just under a half. Although, South America water consumption domestic and industrial approximately same ratio in the world. Conversely, EUropean country's industrial use , just over a half. Obviously, three types of countries ( Africa, Centra Asia, and South East Asia ) consumption of agricultural use shows a large proportion where's industrial and domestic water use indicates roughly same ratio. Overall, a very large proportion use for agricultural purposes while a tiny portion ratio use for a domestic consumption in the whole world.
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- The chart below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the parkway hotel how the rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 61
- The graph below shows the una titles of goods transported in the uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. 67
- the graph shows the percentage of U.K. Adolescent following a vegetarian diet. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40740740741 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03688212831 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2598701297 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281961446148 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15485976306 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087325795738 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265031685973 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390940559021 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.