The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
The given pie charts reveal the information about the percentum of water used by six different regions for three mainly purposes: industrial, agricultural and domestic.
Overall,it is evident that except Europe and North America, the major proportion of usage of water was in agricultural sector.
It can be seen that the highest statistical data among North America and Europe was from industrial sector whereas the lowest one was from domestic.moreover, neither africa nor central Asia used much water for industrial purposes . Apart from all this, the percentage of water used for industrial, agricultural and domestic in south East Asia was 12, 81 and 7 percentage respectively.
In addition to this, more than 70 percentage of water was used for agricultural purposes in three different regions namely south America, Africa and central Asia. Furthermore, central Asia had been the only country in which the major portion of water had been used for agricultural sector.
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- U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend:Describe the fileAsk him to return it to you by postAsk him about the approximat 56
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99854493301 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3459097115 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28091110605 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155704547562 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768740703144 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173943292665 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810523404438 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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