Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school while others believe it is the responsibility of the government? Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
With the stready growth in modernization; the lifestyles of people have been greatly affected.They have achieved various milestones however some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever.one such issue here is of who has the responsibility for picking up and to drop their children to school; Authorities or Parents? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that it is the responsibility of their parents to bring their children to school on their own.They raise many assertions in defence such as drunken driver's who put their children life at risk so it is reasonable why parents want to make their children under supervision. A recent survey conducted by Hindustan times reveal that On every 7 out of 10 school bus drivers in India are drug addicted which resulted in number of accidents and injured plenty of innocent pupils.In addition to this, some students get bullied by number of other adolescents which lowers down the self esteem of the former student and this problem might lead to major issues in a long run including fear of school or depression.
On the flip side , there are antagonists to this assertions who believe that it is the key responsibilty of the government to pick and drop every student from their home to school and vice versa.They bolster their view point by claiming that in this competitive era every parent of children need to work hard day and night to fulfill the demand of their well beings. To make their arguments more convincing they claim that it is the primary responsibility of the government as they have already number of responsibilities on their shoulder which stuck their life for the past years.They further refer to example of working parents who don't have enough time so that they can drop their children to school.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands so efforts have been done by both sides to find the safest and cleaner mode of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93243243243 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79354535341 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7398752808 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 260.714285714 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.8571428571 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315271235621 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1412669746 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809623829905 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180936583834 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568719075661 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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