In many countries women no longer feel to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and donot require security that man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is one of the ritual which can make two different souls into one.In the current time of technological advancement,one of the most pressing concerns regarding the given is that should modern women need to tie a knot with someone if she feels financially secure or not? I completely agree with the statement and shall explore the valid reasons of these aspects in the following paragraphs.
The first step is to understand why women change their perception towards.Broadly speaking, there are three main reasons for this.The first and foremost is Education, Gone are the days in the male dominent society where women consider lower than male and their primary responsibility was to work in household chores but in this competitive world, As modern women get educating. It makes them confident and self-reliance.A recent survey conducted by University of Berlin reveals that 80% of the women who have completed their bachelor's degree donot want to get married as they are financially reliable on their own .
Another reason is increasing ratio of illiteracy among male candidates. According to University of Berlin, Women brains are more capable to learn something new. They are more hardworking and qualified than men. That difference become a hurdle for them to find out an ideal life partner who is more qualified among them.
As we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that women nowadays show more how good they are, how independent they are, they can do all things that men can do, they do not need the benefits could be brought from the marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, so, as to, broadly speaking
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04074074074 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78760246857 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.116713356 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.1 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194986572562 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579129511845 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519059449191 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101424717585 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579273077381 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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