The pie charts illustrate the differences in the proportions of British students studying at England’s university who could speak more than one language, besides native one, in two different years (2000 and 2010).
It can be seen from the charts that the most common additional language for British students was Spanish in 2000 as well as in 2010. In the first year the proportion of students speaking on it consisted of 30% and this than went up by 5% to 35% in 2010. In both years the minority of students could speak German, this did not change and accounted for 10%.
With regards to the remaining British students able to speak languages other than their maternal one, there were some changes over 10 years. Fewer British students spoke only English in 2010 (10% as opposed to 20% in 2000). The proportion of students preferred French fall by 5% (from 15% to 10%) in 2010, whereas the interest to another language increased and it constituted 20% in comparison to 15% in 2000. Besides, there was a 5% rise in the percentage of students who could speak two languages in addition to English (from 10% in 2000 to 15% in 2010).
Overall, the most popular language for British students was Spanish in both years. Also the percentage of students knowing only native language reduced in two times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, well, whereas, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56298437157 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502222222222 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0278979268 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472736727723 0.215688989381 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188809718301 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910742936125 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277279471604 0.15604864568 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998882572568 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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