The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict various reasons to prefer car or bicycle to work by people.
Roughly speaking, by cycling to work, health and fitness and less pollution occupied a
larger proportion on the other hand, by driving, comfort took a huge part. Safety and speed are
the least proportion by driving and cycling respectively.
Firstly, considering cycling, a three-fifth part is occupied by health and fitness and less pollution with equal proportion which is about 30% each. No parking problems are given by exactly 15%of total people. No costs and faster than
driving took quarter part which are split into 13% and 12% respectively.
In contrast, the huge part is , the percentage of people who prefer to drive comfort is exactly
two-fifth. More than one fifth(21%) people choose a car for distance to work.
Need to carry things to work and faster than cycling are equally divided from a total of 28% together. Finally,
the least preference is given by people to safety which is merely 11%.
In general, people who prefer cycling is to enhance the condition of health and environmental . In contrast,
people who choose car is for comfort and long distance travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, in contrast, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12307692308 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59546279446 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7502334258 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121343151697 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528603022022 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647239810075 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053707682885 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064129498058 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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