The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of police reports for theft, noise complaints, and traffic violations, filed in Johnstown quarterly in 2016. Furthermore, a line chart presents the monthly average temperature of the town in celsius, in 2016.
Overall, the number of reports for the traffic violation is the highest, followed by theft and noise complains. The number of noise complaint reports filed is consistent throughout the year. However, there is a noticeable change in the behavior of reports filed for thefts and traffic violations.
Besides, the average temperature rises gradually from Jan to July, where the highest recorded temperature is 22.5 degrees Celsius, while the temperature falls drastically from July to November. The lowest temperature recorded is 4 degrees Celsius in Jan.
Moreover, the traffic violation report shows an inverse proportion with the average temperature. During Jan-Mar, when the temperature is below 10 degrees, the violation recorded is highest around 190. Similarly, during the highest temp in July-Sep, the violation is the lowest around 145.
On the other hand, theft reports have a direct connection with the temperature. As temperature rises from Jan to July, the numbers also rose from 20 to 140.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, moreover, similarly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53608247423 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87811714412 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0908712121 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204887556006 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821212265171 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634559514266 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120015687527 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591346619372 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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