Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.

What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

“Take care of your body. It is the only place you have to live”. Human beings should be more concern about eating healthy meals. As the world is developing, pollution and a lousy lifestyle are also rising. Nowadays, people are more inclined to junk and processed food than vegetables and fruits. Today, it is so easy to grab a burger from a drive away than to prepare a nutritious snack.

The most significant difficulty of maintaining a healthy diet is the lack of knowledge. People assume that they have to spend thousands of money to eat good food. It is only possible to get proteins through expensive protein powders. However, this is not true, and there are always substitute foods — such as, eggs, which are an excellent source of protein, are very cheap.

There are a few restaurants that serve cheap and healthy foods. Nowadays, people do not have time to cook their meals. After long working hours, they love to spend time with their family than in the kitchen. It makes them comfortable to order the food online. To combat this, fresh and healthy ready to made foods are available in the market. We can cook them within 15 minutes.

One of the dilemma in our minds are healthy foods are not tasty. So it is now a ritual to eat junk foods like burgers, pizza, and coke during parties. We should abolish this tradition.

In brief, though healthy eating may need attention, it is essential to eat good food to stay fit. If we are fit then only we can concentrate on doing other activities like studying, job, and traveling.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...althy meals. As the world is developing, pollution and a lousy lifestyle are also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, in brief, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72893772894 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45010316956 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0868078145 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4761904762 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16247475035 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470271547934 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569166394108 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835400768417 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436196475548 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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