The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph above illustrates the number of policy reports of three categories, theft, noise complaining, and traffic violations of Johnstown in 2016. Also, the graph below shows the shift of average temperature of the city in each month. Overall, the traffic violations was the most frequent among the three types of reports and it was relatively higher in the months when the average temperature was low. The number of theft reports jumped during the summer where its temperature also reached the highest point.
Looking at the charts closely, it is obvious that the report about traffic violations marked the highest number in the city. In particular, from January to March, when the average temperature was the lowest, it reached the highest at about 180 cases.
In addition to that, there was a notable increase in number of theft during the summer time. The rise of temperature of the city certainly related to this jump, because the number of theft and the shifts of average temperature drew a similar curve in the two graphs.
Finally, the number of noise complains remained steady at below 25 reports and it seemed no relevancy with the temperature. It was lower than any other types of reports all over the time.
In conclusion, the reports about traffic violation was the highest throughout the year and by contrast, the noise complains was the lowest in whole year. In number of theft reports, there was a significant increase in summer. Average temperature influenced number of traffic violation and theft, but there was no clear connection with noise complains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... increase in number of theft during the summer time. The rise of temperature of the city ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 262.0 196.424390244 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09923664122 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61088789906 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465648854962 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8831965127 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185066506863 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780467874437 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524916021657 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111216328591 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749279894994 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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