The charts below show the total number of cruise passengers, and their percentage according to age in 1975 and 2003 in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table and column graph illustrates how many cruise passengers and the proportion of the degree of ages in the UK during 28-years
Overall, it can be seen that the number of visitors who are travelled by cruise had a considerable soared over 28 years and also had been grown in following the age groups.
It is clear that the number of people who went on cruises has just around 397837 in 1975, however, the figures gained three-fold go up by 1005231 in 2003. When it is compared to the age groups, under 24 ages from 1975 to 2003 had not reached at 10 per cent. Meanwhile, the range of age from 25 to 44 ages tend to constantly climb by 5% in 1975 and by 5% in 2003.
Furthermore, there was a slightly rises at 13% and 25% with the age groups of 45 to 54 at the given time. Nevertheless, there was a double to roughly 30% in 1975 and 35% in 2003 at the ages from 55 to 64, and it is continued shoot with its figures of 35% and reached the peak at 50% in 2003 of the over 64 years old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...degree of ages in the UK during 28-years Overall, it can be seen that the number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06598984772 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3248287629 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7456115285 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178015875923 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933421460645 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344952485547 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10656814262 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446692284083 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.3 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.92 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.