the charts below shows the percentages of industry sector's contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000.
The pie charts illustrate how the industrial sector's contributed to Indian and Turkey's economy percentage in the year 2000.
Overall, the agriculture sector was contributed to the highest percentage and construction had the least numbers for India's economy while the Turkish economy
had the lowest for finance and business and other services and the largest percentage of contribution did by healthcare and education.
For India, construction services had the least contribution in the year 2000. While agriculture was contributed the largest proportion to an economy with a figure of 24% and the government had half of it(12%). Healthcare and education and the leisure and hospitality sector's had the same percentages of contributions with 17%. Finance and business and other services and manufacturing had less than 10% of contributed about 5% and 8% respectively.
About Turkey's economy, healthcare and education had the highest part for the Turkish economy, while agriculture and leisure and hospitality sector's had equal percentage at 14%. Construction had one-tenth proportion for the county's economy. Finance and business and other sector were contributed only 8%, which was the lowest for the country in the year 2000 and doubled of it(16%) contributed by trade, utilities and transport services. Government and manufacturing had contributed to the country economy, the former sector with 9% and the latter one had 12%.
- an increasing number of people are now using a dating website to meet their second halves Do you think these tendency help people or does harm than good 73
- the charts below shows the percentages of industry sector s contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000 67
- The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- People have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists 61
- The table below given information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tages of contributions with 17%. Finance ,business and other services and manufact...
^^
Line 8, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...portion for the countys economy. Finance,business and other sector was contributed only 8...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and other sector was contributed only 8% , which was the lowest for the country in...
^^
Line 8, column 400, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of it16% contributed by trade, utilities and transport services. Government and m...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84653465347 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21641305138 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480198019802 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3755651705 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.1 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303674458277 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1401342933 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112592505763 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223103010903 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114271817352 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.3012195122 131% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.