The pie chart illustrates, five different reasons that people use bicycle and car for work in certain place.
Overall, health and fitness and less pollution are the two significant factors behind the bicycle users. Likewise, in terms of comfort and distance to work makes up car users in surge level.
Overwhelming majority of people wish to use bicycle because of health and pollution related issues which accounts of 30% each, which is ten percent lower than the car users emphasize comfort with 40%. Moreover, regarding the speed category, 14% of people represents car is faster than cycle. Whereas, bicycle accounts for 12%. However, the amount of people use bicycle because no problem for parking with 15%.
On the other hand, car is best to use which is far distant workers comprises of 21%. People explained the reason behind the use of car was need to carry things to work, which is one percent lower than the no costs category of bicycle users, which is 14% and 13% respectively. Furthermore, relatively smaller percentage of people travel by car because of safer than cycling which is 11%.
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- The table below shows the production of carbon d Nkioxide in five different countries in 2006 67
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- In some countries lifestyle of people changing rapidly and this affect family relationship the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...est to use which is far distant workers comprises of 21%. People explained the reason behin...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of car was need to carry things to work, which is one percent lower than the no c...
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Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'costs'' or 'cost's'?
Suggestion: costs'; cost's
... which is one percent lower than the no costs category of bicycle users, which is 14%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99459459459 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47810573525 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9036533054 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203403825147 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898544248132 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524546312772 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144249192693 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461012555269 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.