All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?
Parents especially father is the corner stone of each family. It is often discussed about the father's role over the family when the arrival of new comer in the home and the paternity leave for them. However, in my opinion, it is not a good idea because, father must do the overwhelming majority of house hold requirements and he will be the one to control and guide over the home. When the birth of a child the expense become high and the maternity care of mother must to do by father at any cost.
Firstly, to settle an accounts for the family would be an exhausting strategy for every one. Increasing expenditure would be managed by the earning member of the family like father. If the time off work may leads to poverty and insufficient nutrition of new born baby and mother. For instance, breast feeding is major nutritious elements for the baby, since, mortality rate of infants is higher in the state of Calcutta by the fact of significant poverty as reported by media. Furthermore, Although affection and caring is inevitable for the baby at once, more than that to give adequate supply for the mother baby would be best to the core.
Secondly, labour and delivery may inhibit the mothers health to do work independently at least three to four months. During that time to give financial support for the family would be the father's matter of choice. Moreover, if the mother may be with an unpaid maternity leave which lead to crisis for the increasing disbursement. For example, single parent family is suffering significant difficulties in daily life.
In conclusion, father's physical support during baby care is inevitable. Nevertheless, psychological and financial support would be the best thing as a father can provided to the family irrespective of voluntary leave for paternal care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fathers'' or 'father's'?
Suggestion: fathers'; father's
...family. It is often discussed about the fathers role over the family when the arrival o...
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Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...ole over the family when the arrival of new comer in the home and the paternity leave for...
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Line 1, column 465, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...e high and the maternity care of mother must to do by father at any cost. Firstly, t...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an account' or simply 'accounts'?
Suggestion: an account; accounts
...ther at any cost. Firstly, to settle an accounts for the family would be an exhausting s...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mothers'' or 'mother's'?
Suggestion: mothers'; mother's
...ly, labour and delivery may inhibit the mothers health to do work independently at leas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89869281046 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72662826351 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.592704154 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151919425547 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593895596733 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437836774944 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963269691398 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208001702171 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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