The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates, the possible causes of minimal production of farmland. Whereas, the table describes the proportion of land degradation in three regions including North America, Europe, and Oceania.
Overall, the overwhelming majority of degradation is caused by overgrazing with 35% and the greatest amount of land degradation done in Europe around 23% among other countries.
Regarding the pie chart, deforestation and over-cultivation make agricultural land in an unproductive state which is about 30% and 28% respectively. While other reasons account for a mere 7% of land degradation.
With regards to the table, compared to other regions, Europe exhibits the highest position in deforestation with 9.8% and over-cultivation at 7.7%. However, North America shows the lowest position in contrast to other two nations such as total degradation was only 5%. Moreover, even though over-cultivation is absent in Oceania, their total land loss is about 13% which is only 10% lower than Europe, and the main factor is overgrazing which is 11.3%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dation is caused by overgrazing with 35% and the greatest amount of land degradat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, while, as to, in contrast, in fact, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52469135802 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25318012375 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9530975019 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161038024989 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723487366172 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448407234002 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102123203068 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568987549096 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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