The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about how much money earned from exporing in
several items in a country in the two years (2015 and 2016) and units
were measured in billon dollars. The table chart illustrates the
percentage change in values of each product of exports in 2016, compared
with 2015.<br>
Overall, almost the items in 2016 had the highest amount of money than
that in 2015 except engineered products. Simultaneously, the categories
related to textiles had the highest percentage of increase from 2015 to
2016.<br>
First of all, there was about 72 billion dollars which was gained from
exporting petroleum products in 2016, this figure was higher than that
in 2015 (around 61 billion dollars). Meanwhile, the amount of money
earned in 2016 still was higher than that in 2015 in exporting
engineered goods with around 61 billowing dollars and nearly 58 billon
dollars respectively. In contrast, there was a distinctive difference
from two previous items that the number of money earned in 2015 was
higher than that in 2016 in exporting gems and jewellery with almost 42
billion dollars and nearly 41 dollars. In addition, the amount of money
earned in both 2015 and 2016 year had about the same figure with around
31 billion dollars in agricultural products. Moreover, around 26 billion
dollars and almost 31 billion dollars were the number of money earned
in exporting textiles goods in 2015 and 2016 year respec.<br>
Secondly, the percentage change in almost categories tended to increase
from 2015 to 2016 excluded gems and jewellery goods. Specially, textiles
goods had the highest percentage change in 2016 compared to 2015 with
15.24 percent, while there was inly 0.81% increase belonged to
agricultural products. The petroleum products and engineered goods had
the increase percentage with 3% and 8.5% respectively. Finally, the
percentage of gems and jewellery items decreased 5.18 percent in 2016
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, still, well, while, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 965.302439024 181% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58466453674 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30192891178 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.373801916933 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1577925127 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.8 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 28.0 3.83414634146 730% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 1.69756097561 1885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32488941198 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163804197244 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770632781305 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101689493015 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092702799294 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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