The charts show information about the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
The graphs illustrate the proportion of men and women aged 60 to 64 who worked in four different countries between 1970 and 2000.
Overall, it is noticeable that the demands of jobs for men and women have a high trend in all four countries in 1970, with the highest percentage of employed was in the United States and the lowest percentage was in Japan. In addition, the percentage of those in all four countries experienced a decreased trend in 2000, with the highest proportion of employed still remaining in the US and the lowest proportion was in Belgium.
In 1970, the United States have the highest percentages of men and women working accounted for nearly 90% and 80% respectively, while the percentage of employees working in Japan was the lowest at nearly 80% for men and 58% for women. In addition, the proportion of working for men from Indonesia is 85%, while the percentage of females was 65%. The percentage of men and women working in Belgium was nearly 80% and 63% respectively.
After 30 years, the percentages of men and women were employed in four countries has decreased, but the proportion of male employees between the ages of 60 and 64 in the United States still has the highest proportion nearly 80%. In contrast, the female employment proportion falls a half for the United States. In addition, Belgium and Japan both have an equal decrease in the male employment rate of 52%, but the female employment percentage from Belgium dropped the most with nearly 10% and Japan's female employment percentage decreased slightly to 49%. The percentage of men and women working in Indonesia decreased by 72% and 50% respectively.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t nearly 80% for men and 58% for women. In addition, the proportion of working for...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88928571429 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77460927567 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.375 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3612270387 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344202701281 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175148531708 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113241424526 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270666264018 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105251356838 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t nearly 80% for men and 58% for women. In addition, the proportion of working for...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 280.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88928571429 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77460927567 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.375 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3612270387 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344202701281 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175148531708 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113241424526 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270666264018 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105251356838 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.