The table below shows how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.
The table compares the consumer spending between an individual and a couple in Australia who need to retire comfortably.
Overall, it is noticeable that almost all of the consumption for living of a retired couple is higher, with the spending for leisure being the highest, while the cost for others is the lowest. In addition, the consumption that a retired individual spends for living with housing is the highest, and the spending for others is the lowest.
Regarding housing, leisure health, and transport, a retired couple spent mostly on leisure at $202 while a retired individual spent only $140. In contrast, a retired individual spends mostly on housing at $184, and it is still lower than the cost of a retired couple for $194. The money spent on travel from retired couples and individuals is almost equal at $108 and $107, respectively. Additionally, the retired couple spent $177 on their health, more than a retired single spent $122.
In terms of clothing, food, and others, the retired couple's cost of clothing is $80, which is almost double the spending that a retired individual would spend. The money for a retired couple's meal is $100, and it is double the cost of a retired single. In addition, $37 is the lowest cost that a retired individual spends for others while a retired couple has to spend 70 USD.
- The main aim of advertising is to increase the sales of products that people do not really need To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The charts show information about the percentage of men and women aged 60 64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000 67
- The graph below shows coffee production in four different countries from 1990 to 2010 67
- The table below shows how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire 76
- The best way to solve the world s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles To what extent do you agree or disagree 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... Overall, it is noticeable that almost all of the consumption for living from a retired c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, still, while, as to, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80176211454 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6329538179 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422907488987 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2166048678 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241747262777 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138196170401 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454300866228 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174257936119 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266163211237 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.