The table below shows how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.
The table compares the consumer spending between an individual and a couple in Australia who need to retire comfortably.
Overall, it is noticeable that almost all of the consumption for living of a retired couple is higher, with the spending for leisure being the highest, while the cost for others is the lowest. In addition, the consumption that a retired individual spends for living with housing is the highest, and the spending for others is the lowest.
Regarding housing, leisure health, and transport, a retired couple spent mostly on leisure at $202 while a retired individual spent only $140. In contrast, a retired individual spends mostly on housing at $184, and it is still lower than the cost of a retired couple for $194. The money spent on travel from retired couples and individuals is almost equal at $108 and $107, respectively. Additionally, the retired couple spent $177 on their health, more than a retired single spent $122.
In terms of clothing, food, and others, the retired couple's cost of clothing is $80, which is almost double the spending that a retired individual would spend. The money for a retired couple's meal is $100, and it is double the cost of a retired single. In addition, $37 is the lowest cost that a retired individual spends for others while a retired couple has to spend 70 USD.
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Many people go to university for academic study More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football However others think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining Why is this the case How to solve this issue 73
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football However others think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... Overall, it is noticeable that almost all of the consumption for living from a retired c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, still, while, as to, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80176211454 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6329538179 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422907488987 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2166048678 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241747262777 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138196170401 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454300866228 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174257936119 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266163211237 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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