The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and B in two years 1960 and 2010.
The given pie charts compare the proportion of working force engaged in different occupational fields mainly manufacturing, sales, and services in two towns A and B over a period of two years 1960 and 2010.
In the overall trend, nearly after half a century, a major proportional jump can be observed in the manufacturing sector in town A, whereas sales remained the most popular working sector in town B however, it faced a slight downfall in the latter year.
According to the given illustration, in town A, 41% of the population was associated with sales in 1960, which got shrunk by almost half in 2010. Also, nearly one-third of the masses were interested in the service sector in 1960, which dropped down by 50% in the latter year. On the contrary, the manufacturing sector that accounted for just 29% before 60 years, witnessed a huge surge by more than two-fold in 2010.
For town B, nearly three-fourth of the people were indulged in the sales sector, which fell down to 53% in 2010, a major dropdown by 17%. However, a slight increase of 2% in the service department can be observed, but a significant rise of about 15% in the manufacturing sector shifted the percentage to 25% in 2010.
- The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries 78
- The charts show the proportion of holidaymakers of one region staying in different types of accommodation in three different years 74
- The charts below give information about the electricity generation in the two countries in 2009 73
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children s sports between 2008 and 2014 The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period 78
- The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, third, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80861244019 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.818916891 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0505041344 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409808800022 0.215688989381 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168010098965 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830584090313 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237584431527 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731860286722 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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