Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia

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Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia

The chart shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities; Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart in last 4 weeks. Overall, more than 30% of all residents have buying and drinking habits.
People who bought instant coffee and went to a cafe for coffee or tea are always higher than people who bought fresh coffee in every city. In Melbourne, people who went to a cafe for coffee or tea are the highest percentage than all other cities in Australia. However Adelaide has the lowest percentage of people who went to cafe for coffee or tea. Most of people live in cities like to go to a cafe for coffee or tea except Adelaide. People in Brisbane and Adelaide has the same percentage for buying fresh coffee and they are the lowest in this sector compare to other cities.
For all cities, there are more than 45% of people who went to cafe for coffee or tea. On the other hand, there are lower than 45% of people who bought fresh coffee among these cities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...age than all other cities in Australia. However Adelaide has the lowest percentage of p...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...ple who went to cafe for coffee or tea. Most of people live in cities like to go to a cafe for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53225806452 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15086691028 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430107526882 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4790844315 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313240538197 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153211565653 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756416030029 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220236286353 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987780160903 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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