The column graph shows the percentage of males in a particular country who prefer watching sport to males who prefer participating in sport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main future and making comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of males who are watching and prefer to take part in different types of sports games.
By analysing the data, a large percentage of males enjoy watching football and horse riding and racing, both are at almost the same position 40℅. Rugby and badminton as their favourite sport for watching, accounting for roughly 27℅. Whereas, basketball sport is second most prefer watching sports. Fishing is not more popular to watch, it is at 13℅ only.
In addition, it is clear from the graph that fishing is only a sport, which touched 50℅ males love to take part in this sport. Basketball and badminton are in the same position 25℅ males take part in these sport. However, football is below the 10℅, males do not like to play football. Appropriately, 23℅ males choose to take part in rugby and horse riding and racing.
Overall, fishing is the most popular sports event in which, males like to take part, while it is the last event they would like to watch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r watching, accounting for roughly 27℅. Whereas, basketball sport is second most prefer...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
.... Overall, fishing is the most popular sports event in which, males like to take part...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80459770115 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35360089607 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6424542098 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274150075307 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117687792066 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778147626206 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188524280813 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727541942071 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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