Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for future careers. but others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that education plays a vital role in an individuals life. Some sections of society deem that students should complete their further education at University for their future career. While some people argue that they should commence some work after their school education. However, I will discuss both points in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are many reasons why people should study in a college. The most remarkable reason is today's society believe that knowledge is a key to success. If people have appropriate information related to their field then they easily find jobs and fulfil their wants. Moreover, the university not only provides study-related information but people learn many other things also, such as they take apart in a different competition, it will help them to choose the right career. For instanve, sometimes a person is not aware of their inner ability, so when they take part in a competition related to sport, art, quizzes and so on, that time they realize their talent and according to that they choose their future career. The University education is essential to enhance knowledge and learn some extra skills as well.
On the flip side, some people think that students should embark on some work when they completed their school education. The prime reason behind this is people endeavour to stimulate students to learn a skill base work like to become plumbers, electricians and so on. If people start to learn about these skills at the beginning of their age, so they can make a good career in that. Particular field. For instance, many countries need a skills base person because they have almost all categories of people, who run an organization and operate other sectors well, but they did not have plumbers, wiremen and so on. Even though, authorities provide good wages to these people. That is a reason some people think that students should start working after their school education. So they can easily fulfil their goal and manage their future in a better way, and the most important thing is they never depend on others because they have their skill, so they can manage their finance in a better way. Last but far from least, if the nation has all categories of people then it will be beneficial for the nation development and economy.
Therefore, on the basis of all the points discussed till now and by my personal experience as well, I would like to sate in conclusion that, students should study at the university for their further education, it is most important than working at an early age because people should have an appropriate degree than they can easily manage their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...that education plays a vital role in an individuals life. Some sections of society deem tha...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a skill' or simply 'skills'?
Suggestion: a skill; skills
...ield. For instance, many countries need a skills base person because they have almost al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95535714286 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50076518902 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475446428571 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2906285202 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.842105263 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375744139632 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117958226975 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868522047494 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254546087395 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476142168596 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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