Describe an important choice you had to make in your life.
You should say:
- when you had to make this choice
- what you had to choose between
- whether you made a good choice
And explain how you felt when you were making this choice
Well, frankly speaking, there have been numerous decisions that I have made during the course of my life, however the one that I think should be mentioned is the decision made when I stood in-between two choices: either working for a local company, or for a foreign entity. It is about 9 years ago.
As you might know, working for a foreign entity provides so many precious job opportunities. Not only increasing your exposure to multiple areas of the business and provides more opportunities for job movement within the organization, but being invested in the career development through internal and external continuing education and on the job training. You are able to expand your knowledge of the global market by applying best practices relating to policies and strategies.
However, every coin has two sides, the drawbacks of working for an offshore company is that it can be hard to build a cohesive culture among employees with different cultural backgrounds. Organizational culture plays a crucial role in the health and prosperity of a company. It refers to the values and norms the employees share and it can have a direct impact on their happiness and productivity. In addition, you must work under high pressure and the big volume of workloads and a lot of deadlines.
Although I can learn how to face and deal with challenges, but still, I think it is a very risky choice to work for foreign company. At the end, I chose to work for a local company. And you know, I have had more time to take care of my son and my small company. Here, despite of the of the bureaucracy of the local company structure of the local company structure, I still have a chance to meet and greet new colleagues that share the same culture with me, and another crucial reason for it is because of the wonderful time I had with my family. So far, I think it is not necessarily the best choice, but the most practical one. And if you ask me, I would say that I’m reasonably content with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...een numerous decisions that I have made during the course of my life, however the one that I think s...
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Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of the'.
Suggestion: of the
...son and my small company. Here, despite of the of the bureaucracy of the local company struct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, however, if, so, still, well, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 5.60731707317 696% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 351.0 196.424390244 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68660968661 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72609231119 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 106.607317073 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552706552707 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5985482838 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162061759012 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553650753331 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059952534278 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899851797514 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340487855896 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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