The diagram below gives information on the evolution of the horse. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates, the genetic progression of horse from 40 million years to the modern type of horse. Picture explain the prominent change of horse foot over many million years through.
Initially, the ancestor horse named as Eohippus which is the prime category of modern horse around 40 million years ago. Eohippus foot just look like the human palm or leg with four distinct fingers and most probably a goat shaped appearence. While, after a 10 million year, there was a slight changes in their shape and size of foot such as the aptitude of foot fingers lessen the length and middle two fingers joined together. Moreover, growth of hair on the neck and upper side was predominant and length of tail was increase little which is called as misohippus.
Regarding mcrychippus, found as 15 million years ago which is the primitive view of modern horse such as, his joined finger lengthen more and foot was strengthened to stand on that finger slightly. The size of hair and tail was developed to become a modern horse as seen now. Furthermore, modern horse foot was completely change after 15 million years with strong foot pedal originated from the fingers and with proper ankle joint to flexible. This hard pedal helps to run fast and climb on difficult ways, and long hair on upper part and lengthen tail makes up the modern horse to a beautiful animal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lengthen more and foot was strengthened to stand on that finger slightly. The s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83829787234 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39875476976 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544680851064 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9847406045 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.7 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0171000570501 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100690301913 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227416008866 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0189119380059 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198776100888 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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