Nowadays, advanced technologies made the work life more easier than before. But the number of work hours still a controversial debate between employer and work owner. So, many people say a fixed number of hours per week should put in a consider of a work responsible, however, other believe that if work needs more work hours, people should response. In this essay will discus both view with giving own opinion for that debate.
We must to acknowledge that the time is a central point of everything, so from this concept, the people should work a fixed number of hours weekly for their health. Furthermore, everyone has many activities beside his work and any changes maybe made a drop. Where, the companies has determined a 8 hours work daily for it's employers, for more sustainable productivity of the work. However, a fixed time depend on the employee tolerance,
Nevertheless, other work owners believe that if the work needs more work hours form the employees, they should to accept.
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- People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...dvanced technologies made the work life more easier than before. But the number of work hou...
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Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... number of hours per week should put in a consider of a work responsible, however, other b...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...iving own opinion for that debate. We must to acknowledge that the time is a central ...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...op. Where, the companies has determined a 8 hours work daily for its employers, f...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d time depend on the employee tolerance, Nevertheless, other work owners believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95808383234 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6622811058 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2830032292 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477397818591 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207764929311 0.084324248473 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103686134017 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344710587756 0.151304729494 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105460796499 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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