The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottels, are produced and recycled.

Essay topics:

The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottels, are produced and recycled.

The process charts show the steps, which involve in how to produce, new glass and recycled the used one.

Overall, it can be seen that, there are many stages in this process, each and every step has its own importance. Moreover, if any stage is break it stops the whole process.

After minute concentration on this chart, it is crystal clear that for making the glass, firstly, all the elements are mixed such as: sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals. Then, it is sent to the melting the furnace is approx 1500 degree celsius. Afterthat, for giving the shape to glass it is moved in the glass bowling and finally, glass containers are obtained.

On the other hand, for recycling, the used glass is collected and it is directed to the sorting, while, according to this glass is differentiated. Furthermore, for removing the impurities of glass it is sent to washing area, meanwhile, before reaching the last stage with the help of crusher glass is crushed into nano particles and melted. Afterthat, it is moulded into new products.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng the impurities of glass it is sent to washing area, meanwhile, before reaching...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86033519553 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57550988097 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9421427129 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154552575536 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575929503774 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573008709609 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923119829871 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573117351514 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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