Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all mean others believe that these games are contributing in their development. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the proclivity of children is burgeoning towards the computer games because they prefer to spend more time on technological games, while, some masses think it is a negative development for progeny's and others insisted that it is a positive development. This essay will be discuss both the views and prove my opinion in the fourth-coming paragraphs of this essay.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why computer games are bad for offsprings. First and the foremost is that increasing health issues is a cause of advancement in technology. which not only makes the children lazy but also reduce the capability of doing exercise of wards. Moreover, due to these drawbacks pupils will suffer from many ailments like ADHD,SPD,and DSD. Although, children do not behave properly with their family members and even the socially development of child's mind does not takes place in pupil's mind because they give more preference to computer games. Therefor, these are the symptoms of negative development.
On the other hand, there are multifarious reasons why computer games are positive development for offsprings. The most conspicuous is that spending time on playing games, increase the concentration of children. To clarify it, by playing the games on computer makes the children creative and they learn some leadership qualities because sometime in a game pupils represent team. So it will increase the feeling of leadership in child's blood and it helps in children development.
To conclude with, playing games on computer bring some health issues but it also have some positive aspects and even the hazardous effects cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29924242424 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82306263155 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.453171891 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315063581135 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101282929734 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653413155352 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186139957924 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042481303211 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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