The diagram below show how glass containers,such as bottles , are produced and recycled.
The first flow diagram reveals the process of glass production,and the second diagram shows various steps about glass recycling process. It is a clear and coherent representation.
overall,it is clearly seen that the initial step in manufacturing of glass containers,which is mixing,and it is using four elements namely :sand,soda ash,limestone and other chemicals are mixed together. Nextly, produced mixture is heated in a glass furance at approximately 1500°c. Afterthat melted material is blowing for producing diffrenet shape of glass containers.
Moving ahead, process of glass recycling begins with the collection of used glass products. Collected glass are seperated according to its colour.After sorting ,glass is washed for remove any type of stickers, and dust. At the last stage of recycling, the glass is crushed and melted,and the resulting molten glass can finally be mouldes to new merchandise .
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...an finally be mouldes to new merchandise .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67153284672 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1908834247 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700729927007 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8351325404 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244233712984 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103697295715 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594501270392 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165896773163 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260936462146 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.