The graph below shows the female unemployment rates in each country of United kingdom in the year 2013 and 2014.

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The graph below shows the female unemployment rates in each country of United kingdom in the year 2013 and 2014.

The given bar chart reveals the information about female unoccupied rates in four countries of United Kingdom during the year 2013 and 2014. The data is caliberated in percentum.

It is lucid, in England the average of jobless women was 6.8% in year 2013 and 6.5% in year 2014. As well as, Scotland had been followed to England the average of unemployed women were similar respectively 6.1% in 2013 and 6.7% in 2014 it was high as compared to england.

However, just a meagre diffrence between Wales and Northen Ireland in both years. Northen Ireland was 0.2% more as to rested women from Wales in year 2013 while after one year the percentage of unemployed women was much from Northen Ireland.

Overall, it is clearly seen that maximum proportion of jobless women in Scotland and England as far as the other two nation are least favourable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...and and England as far as the other two nation are least favourable.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, well, while, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84246575342 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46012485438 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1740398631 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250100931863 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111360137801 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127162911222 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146772810344 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124294438927 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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