The given diagram summarizes the life cycle of Salmon fish. Overall, we can see that this life cycle goes through three stages from laying the eggs to end up with an adult salmon fish. Additionally, it appears that this type of fish spends part of its development in the livers before migrating to the sea.
Getting to the details, the first stage is happened in the upper rivers where water flows slowly. Adult salmons lay their eggs among reeds and small stones. After 5-6 months the eggs hatch and produce what is called fry with about 3-8 cm long. Next, these baby fishes flow towards the lower river where the water speed is fast and this stage takes about 4 years before reaching the second stage.
During the second stage, which is approximately 4 years, fry increases in size and length and when their length increase three times as long as fry, reaching 12-15 cm, it becomes smolt which migrates to the sea. After 5 years in the sea, smolt enlarges in size and its length now hit 70-76 cm to be changed to an adult salmon. Finally, these adult fishes repeat the cycle when they swim to the river back to lay their eggs in a slower flowing water.
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51904761905 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02188143449 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6896943067 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128413804207 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669132663264 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770672964665 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976411182064 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612528160465 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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