The diagrams provide us an overview of the life of salmon, a large creature of fish species. As illustrated, there are are 3 steps in total, from little tiny eggs to large ones and can also be repeated over again.
From the beginning, salmon eggs are just tiny little dots that are under huge small stones and reeds. They are usually live in a river that are higher but at a very slow pace. This process takes about half a year before it envolve to fly, a small fish that it's length are ranging from 3 to 8 cm.
Fry move onto other river which has a lower level then the previous one but the flowing has increasingly gone much faster and they have to stay there longer up to 4 years. Then the size of them will be increased by 7cm to smolt at this stage they can swim at any sea that they want for approximately 5 year period. After all these steps, the adult salmon will be their form, with more than 70cm. These fish will then go back to the starting pount and hatch down salmon eggs so that it keep maintain the species.
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21212121212 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03359198905 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9367125523 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909810113649 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433011440611 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060856629959 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729747945575 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530029646072 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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