In the world currently, environmental problem is becoming one of the most concern issues to deal with. Many people think the cause of this is because of the vanished of rare species and plantation while others believe there are other factors that are way damaging than this. Personally, whilst this take a large harm to the nature, I believe that some other reason should be worth to take a look for.
There are many reason that people believe that is most worried. First, these play an important role of wildlife habitat, making the environment a beautiful sight that we are looking now. If all of this disappered, it will become a place with no scenery at all. Futhermore, these species are playing an important role of protecting ourselves from natural disasters such as storm, blizzard, flood and tornado. It will not be the same if they gone from the planet, allow disasters to damage tons of cash to the goverment and most importantly, people's lives. In other cases, people won't have anything to eat, thus spreading the poverty to many citizens and the death rate will increase due to that matter.
But not only the extinction of animals and plants are most concern to our eyes. Human people are creating more damage than ever then other factors. For instance, using air- conditioner may help us to survive from the hotness of the summer, but these devices will release harmful gases to the environment, and as a result, creating climate change to the world. Not only that, plastic stuffs that we used everyday will take thousands of years to dissolve, adding garbage to our planet. Last but not least, accommodations like buses, cars release thousands of carbon dioxide every day, creating air pollution.
In conclusion, not just the vanished of animals and plants are the main problem, but there are many as well to destroy or planet. From my point of view, people should take this seriously to avoiding this from damaging, recreate a save place for everyone to live with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... worth to take a look for. There are many reason that people believe that is most worrie...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... only that, plastic stuffs that we used everyday will take thousands of years to dissolv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46188242041 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3110215865 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160211324603 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512915987096 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297031085745 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947132172358 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143768096025 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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