the diagram below show the percentage of death from heart disease and cancer and calories consumed from process food in different countries.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The given bar chart provides information on proportion of death from heart disease and cancer and it also depicts percentage of calories consumed consumed from proceed food in 12 country.
A production pattern is observed in the graph.The percentage of the heart in the Cancer disease is the highest in the hungry at 90% where is percentage calorie consumption is the at least 9%.every 8 in the 10 Americans are suffering from the heart for cancer this is followed by the Belgium Sweden and Finland where the proportion in between the 60 to 70%.moreover, cancer and heart patient remain in the range of 35% and the 55% in the Portugal, Venezuela and greece.lastly, less than 20% people suffer from such disease in Mexico, Korea, Thailand and Laos.
on the other hand, calorie consumption from the processed food is the highest in the Louse 90 %,followed by the Thailand 70 %, Mexico 48 % and Greece 37%.moreover, intake of a calorie from the process food in the country like the hungry, USA, Belgium, Sweden Sweden, Finland, Portugal and Venezuela is the range of the 10% to 30%.
Ironically, the countries where the law less calorie and consume show a higher proportion of a cancer in the cardiac disease
- prevention is better than cure .researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures .to what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- the diagram below show the percentage of death from heart disease and cancer and calories consumed from process food in different countries.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant. 73
- In companies, promotions to high positions should be given to employees inside thecompany and not to somebody outside the company or new hiring. Do you agree ordisagree? 56
- Nowadays celebrities are the more famous for the glamorous and the wealth and therefore the achievements, and this set a bed example of two young peopleTo what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think that it is a better for children to grow up in the countryside than in the city others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, moreover, so, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76595256535 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.739879753 43.030603864 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 252.5 112.824112599 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 22.9334400587 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.23603664747 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359029197011 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233381752385 0.103423049105 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746161791884 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233381752385 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746161791884 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.2329268293 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 61.2550243902 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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