prevention is better than cure .researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures .to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable fact that prevent from many diseases is better idea according to some proponents. However, some people believe that research and care for maladies people which is excellent to curb this issue. In my opinion, I strongly uplift the conviction that many diseases require a lot of research and treatment rather than advanced precautions.
To begin with, in contemporary era, people asserted deeply study on some disease and then according to result, doctor can treat their patients. It is evident that not only prevention is aid to reduce acute disease. However, analysis of such a harmful ailments and medical cure is almost equally pivotal for mankind. If a person is already suffering from disease then doctor have only one option to choose how to prevent from danger while treatment, the only one way they know prevention step when they rearch that which medicine require more. Example can be seen in polio which is highly spread among the people while 20's century, owning to much research about polio and eventually, they got remedies for that, in current time polio is disappeared by vaccines.
On the other hand, prevention is better than cure is rightly said which means that we should also take necessary steps to prevent this disease. Furthermore, some disease progress to other people using various medium and as a result it is really hard to step them. Apart from this, by preventing diseases, we can save people from severe experience of this disease.
In conclusion, medical Research on disease and preventing them to occur, both have equal importance and we should equally focus on both areas to make lives healthier and enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07272727273 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52677823809 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5919043993 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198934462444 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764520292592 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554646401956 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122996527574 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266650861648 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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