The diagram below shows the changes which took place in a coastal area called pentland from 1950 and 2007

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the changes which took place in a coastal area called pentland from 1950 and 2007.

The picture depicts the information about changes in coastal town in portland in 1950 and 2007.

it is crystal clear that, in 1950 sea can be seen in north corner in the front of that corner was straight road. One side of the road industries were there and another of the road cark park rest of the area covered by grass.

Probing further, in 2007 sea was remain same it was in 1950 but industrial area changed into park and swimming pool . Next , car park replaced into apartments. Which area were covered by grassland in 1950 after 57 year that area covered shops and cinema after tha in south west corner built shops and houses.

Overall, the big change can be observed in grassland into shops and houses.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The picture depicts the information about ch...
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... town in portland in 1950 and 2007. it is crystal clear that, in 1950 sea can ...
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Suggestion: remained
...ss. Probing further, in 2007 sea was remain same it was in 1950 but industrial area...
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...area changed into park and swimming pool . Next , car park replaced into apartment...
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...anged into park and swimming pool . Next , car park replaced into apartments. Whic...
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... year that area covered shops and cinema after tha in south west corner built sh...
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...d cinema after tha in south west corner built shops and houses. Overall, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 588.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15527425183 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0165773388 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181958340444 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827031378518 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685845029355 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114730013479 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705368284299 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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