The diagram below shows the design for a wind turbine and its location

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The diagram below shows the design for a wind turbine and its location

The diagrams illustrates what is a wind turbine and where it can be placed. Overall, according to the figure that wind is essentially of turbine to produce power that generator make electricity.
To begin with, a wind turbine has three main elements: blades, steel tower and computer. The process initiates with three blades which are made from fibreglass are rotated by the wind while the tower is made from steel. As a result, the generator is connected with these parts that can generate 1.5 megawatts energy power. Meanwhile, a wind sensor which is installed on top of tower behind blades has responsibility to measure the speed and direction. The computer can adjust the direction and angle of blades which is put in a house nearby the tower.
Wind turbines can be placed near the coast or on the top of mountain. However, the advantages of install wind turbines in a high location where has more wind blows with maximum wind strengths and landscape is not spoiled. Finally, Install domestic wind turbine on the hill can create 100 kilowatts electricity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, while, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93296089385 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64106994613 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.015195382 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214516301476 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976098644792 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723078792821 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171396541173 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726794130344 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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