The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted

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The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.

The diagram illustrates the production of avocado oil.
This is an eight-stage process, with centrifugation and refining being the most important. Avocado is the input material of this process, the output product is avocado oil, and the byproduct is a mixture of natural fertilizers. In the first stage, avocados are manually classified by workers to remove the rotten ones before being washed in the bucket of water.After washing the avocados, they are passed to a crusher to separate the avocado flesh from the seeds and skin. The avocado flesh is then cut into fine pieces in an industrial blender to become the input material for the next step. The next stage is a two-step centrifugation process in which the avocado flesh is spun at extremely high speeds in the first step to separate the liquid from the solid and oil from water in the second step. The whole process takes place at a maximum temperature of 45-50 degrees Celsius.Rotten avocadoes, seeds and skin, and solid centrifugation waste are byproducts of this process, that are used as natural fertilizer for the orchards. The final three stages are oil refining with avocado oil from the previous centrifugation process as the input material. Oil is filtered to produce purified oil which is stored in a tank set up below. The clarified oil is then extracted by a dispeser, generating the resulting product of oil avocado.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and oil from water in the second step. The whole process takes place at a maximum ...
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...um temperature of 45-50 degrees Celsius.Rotten avocadoes, seeds and skin, and solid ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99568965517 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83671452852 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508620689655 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7487848488 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262663221911 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136394234655 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111283722857 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282906530335 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617356107028 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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