The diagram below shows how beer is produced.
Given is the diagram depicting how to make beer.
Conspicuously, this is a linear process with myriad steps, which commences with crushing malted barley and ends at packaging.
The manufacturing initiates when malted barley is milled before this powder is mashed with water. After that, the mixture is lauterred to get liquid and simultaneously the grain is for the cows' meal. Thenceforth, sugar and hops added into liquid are boiled altogether and thereafter poured into a whirlpool to prepare for the next step which is to cool the mixture. Subsequently, the yeast is employed for the fermenting purpose; after a course of time, CO2 and yeast are removed while the rest is moved to another holder for maturing. Moving to the penultimate phase,beer is ready for filtering. The alcoholic drink is soon afterwards filled in distinct containers, barrels and bottles before it is purchased by consumers, which is the ultimate stage of the process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cows'' or 'cow's'?
Suggestion: cows'; cow's
...and simultaneously the grain is for the cows meal. Thenceforth, sugar and hops added...
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Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , beer
...aturing. Moving to the penultimate phase,beer is ready for filtering. The alcoholic d...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14935064935 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86340076187 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4792191556 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0572903501802 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420121159095 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111153610748 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112032309092 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158437610942 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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