The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The picture reveals data on the process of making coffee and preparation for sale on the market.
Overall, it is clear that there are 11 distinct stages in the production of coffee, from the initial collection of coffee beans to the eventual packing f coffee jars.
At the first stage of the process, coffee beans are picked by farmers in the fields. Then, these beans are dried, roasted and cooled before delivering into the machine to grind which turns the beans into coffee granules.
At the sixth stage in the process, coffee granules are mixed with hot water before scraining the mixture. Next, this mixture is frozen and grinded once again it into the liquid. After that, this liquid is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates and leaving the coffee granules. Finally, coffee granules are packed into jars and transported to supermarkets and shops.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33197437668 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6659096315 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177555240281 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842183498903 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760925098392 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120405186673 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709745033448 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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