The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram reveals the process of water which generated by Electricity in hydroelectric power station.

Overall, the process involves various stages beginning from river water through sophisticated producers prior to create sufficent electrical energy throughout the day.

The process is begundal when water river flow to the high level in reservoir as the effect of heavy water from housing. Once, dam functions to hold back the water, such downpour is collected in a reservoir linking with it. To following step, dam channel water down with generate electricity in the day cause the obtaining energy from the sun during the day and it rotates to produce electrical current. Pass through power station, the water comes onto the shelter and ready to pump back to reservoir, a circular process occured based on generator to result National grid and to minimize the low of level reservoir.

The electricity made by power station in the day is transferred to the reversible turbines and pump water into high level reservoir in the night. Moreover, the power station is responsible to deliver the water into the river through the turbines. While, the amount of water which was produced reduces at night. The dam endure the rush of water at the same time. It caused by a malfunction of hydroelectric power station. Finally, water flows to the river for the second time

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er into the river through the turbines. While, the amount of water which was produced...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'endures'.
Suggestion: endures
... was produced reduces at night. The dam endure the rush of water at the same time. It ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, moreover, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10666666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66946519821 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524444444444 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.167209552 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211104960985 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108023502461 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137872114667 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194468322924 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162903016567 0.0819641961636 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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