The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram explains how to produce electricity from water in a hydroelectric power station.

It can be clearly seen that, the river must be hold back by a dam, creating a high-level reservoir behind it. There is an intake which is under the dam and it is opened only daytime, and is closed at night to the water flows out into the river below the dam during pumping. From that intake water flows through a line of pipe that is biased. Then water comes to the reversible turbines, operating the generator and creates electricity to the national grid that it attached with power lines. Next water is released to low-level reservoir. Finally, at night, water is pumped from reversible turbines into high-level reservoir.

In general, the process begins with the water flows from river into a high-level reservoir and ends with the transmission of power lines to national grid.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91275167785 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62415249145 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3219465676 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931203813321 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544955098691 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929025725223 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117993371024 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11891930666 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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