The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The diagram shows the various steps in the production of ethanol fuel from the original ingredient of corn.

Overall, it is readily apparent that to produce ethanol fuel, the raw material which is corn is processed in eight stages, from harvesting corn to the transportation of the finished product.

To commence with, after being harvested from fields by farmers, corn then being subsequently stored and milled. After being broken down in the milling process, the former product enters the cooking stage. It is at this stage that a sufficient amount of water is added and the mixture is cooked within 4 hours before encountering the fermenting machine in the following stage.

The fermentation of the mixture takes 2 days ( 48 hours ) and subsequently liquidized, with solid wastes being released as by-products. The next step starts as the ethanol liquid is passed through the purifying phase with five hours before being stored. Finally, the finished product is transported and delivered to gas stations.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25308641975 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75301029624 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2006129092 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236635298766 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107721128533 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154414233234 0.0843802449381 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199548255539 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170787461005 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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