The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The stipulated pictogram manifests production of noodles (that are prepared instantly).

Overall, the key points to not all that this process is quite complicated and demand a lot of raw products.

Apropos, to the details of the process, that first and foremost flour has brought to the storage silos and poured into the mixer. After that, some water and oil is added to the flour to prepare dough. Furthermore, dough is transferred over rollers where dough sheets are formed. The fourth step includes the making of strips.

Probing further, after passing through to the stripping machine nodal discs are prepared and cooking oil is added to these. Additional these discs are now kept for drying. On the other side assorted vegetables, noodle discs, spices are added in the cups. At last, cups are sealed to protect them from surroundings and labelled. Now they are ready to sale and distribute among
sellers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...our to prepare dough. Furthermore, dough is transferred over rollers where dough ...
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... Probing further, after passing through to the stripping machine nodal discs are...
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...ed in the cups. At last, cups are sealed to protect them from surroundings and la...
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...y are ready to sale and distribute among sellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08609271523 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49103475598 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682119205298 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8737482891 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8181818182 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0345459100913 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0132598704065 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282052834679 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0262996914797 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317716028175 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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