The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram depicts the process of instant noodles production that consists of 8 separate stages.
The manufacturing flow requires the usage of sophisticated machinery and a bunch of supplements to produce the ready-to-eat meal.
At the initial stage, the flour is transferred by trucks to the storage silos where it is kept until supplied to mixer, being the first stage. Once put in the mixer the flour is blended with water and oil in order to obtain plasticity. After that the mass is flattered into wide dough sheets by rollers and cut straight away with the help of dough strips, which transforms the dough into separated noodles disks.
The second part of the process begins as soon as the oil is added to the noodles discs to make them tastier and the disks are dried to the needed condition. The following stage is the distribution of the noodles into cups to which the vegetables and spices are added supplying the dish with healthy nutrients. Finally, once the cups are labeled and sealed, they are distributed to supermarkets’ shelves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e distributed to supermarkets’ shelves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92696629213 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71545976812 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9559572539 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.625 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12552025356 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541660307266 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725689674379 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943752367124 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827924003532 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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